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Hinamatsuri Set Special Edition

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:iconpervygreenplz:Order now and you can play them at 3rd March (hinamatsuri day or girls's day or Yellow's birthday) :la:
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The Ásatrúar Critic here, time for a Critique!

First thing I will say is that the amount of adorableness in this picture is nigh overpowering. I will describe the good things first, then the things that could be improved upon.

The good parts... well, there are a lot of them. The overall style of the picture is excellent, and the cute Pikachus and Pichu only add to the good qualities. The texture used for many of the things is quite nice as well, it adds a good bit more detail than just flat colors. The two humans are well-drawn as well, not to mention their clothing.

Now, for things that could be a bit better. The white space in the far back of the drawing is a little distracting, and would have been better if filled with a relevant background. But really, other than that, everything is fine.

And now, here is your Devious Rating!

Vision: What seems to be two humans and their Pokemon, just hanging out. Nothing too crazy, but it just screams with cuteness.

Originality: The characters, aside from the Pokemon, do not seem to be standard-fare people. That alone is pretty nice, but the surroundings are tasteful and go well with both the humans and the Pokemon.

Technique: One word could describe your Technique. I will instead use many words, and tell you exactly what is great about this deviation. Everything is sharp and well-drawn, and exceptionally clean. The differing textures on the pieces of decoration are pleasant, and the actual clothing the humans are wearing is very nice.

Impact: I was not very moved by this piece from the get-go, it actually took me a little bit to come up with things to write about it. However, the cuteness and skill portrayed here has made me like the deviation a good bit. And I doubt I am the only one who believes as such.



This has been a Critique by The Ásatrúar Critic, aka *MabusTheDark. If you have any questions about how I work, or if you want a Critique, please do not hesitate to send me a Note, or leave a message on my Page or Shoutbox!